Essay research!

I have been researching into artists that collaborate and have found some really interesting people! Some of the artists have been to the university to do an artist lecture which I can remember being really interesting! 

The artists that I am looking at are:

1. Mally Mallinson & Shaun Doyle
2. John Wood & Paul Harrison
3. Doug Fishbone

I have had a go at putting an introduction together, this is what it reads so far:

The idea of collaboration is working in the format of a team, sharing ideas and gathering understanding to generate a well structured and thematic composition. In this essay I will highlight comparisons between working as an individual and collaborating with others and whether each display successful traits.